Untruth

It's been a while

Since I could feel the beauty in my intentions 

A kind of soundless melody

Making what can't be felt into illusion

Lost in a contorted frame of mind

Twisted into unfathomable shapes

I just wish I had one more peaceful day

To remember the losses I try to savor

But my world lies forlorn in fracture

Sun falling into an endless winter

Moon lying in her serene grave

I close my eyes and consume the darkness

The bleed takes me and I begin to fade

Is it too late to say that I'm sorry?

For convincing myself of such deception

Living in the perdition that I have rendered

This hollow world where I am not afraid

Reviews

[Aleyah]

Your poems are always so poignant. Having eloquent & unique vocabulary; every line you write is beautiful. I love how you ask, "Is it too late to say I'm sorry?" It adds intensity to your poem, like a delicate breakage in the flow, causing more emotions to erupt. Love the meaning of this too. My favorite lines are definitely "but my world lies forlorn in fracture, sun falling into an endless water".
You're an awesome poet, as I always look forward to reading them (:

[pratishtha]

this poem is really adorable,,,
great work...

[Pratik]

This is so wonderfully written... just out of the world!!! ... Keep up the good work....:)

[Miss Marie Riorden.]

Very thought provoking and an enjoyable read. It had a mystic quality to it that kept me reading.
"It's been a while
Since I could feel the beauty in my intentions
A kind of soundless melody
Making what can't be felt into illusion"
For some reason this reminds me of myself, but it's still my favorite lines of the entire thing. A great way to start it out.

Loved.

-Marie-

[donny ingraham]

like this poem, thanks for sharing

[Bridgette's Ink]

Wow, this created a serene picture in my mind. Going in favorites.