World of Abandon

Cold winter hymn singing a grave song

A cadence of remorse in remembering

All of those who lie dead and gone

 

Young lover buried in the spring

A perfect mimic of everything pure

Her innocence fallen in soft locks of blonde

The living whisper her name no more

 

Forgotten in a hundred years of snow

Sorrowful, only soul left to chill

An untended cross, a worn stone

Of this beautiful girl's face no one knows

 

Fallen angel left to such a cruel fate

Noose of hope and featherless wings

In eternity alone this pretty girl lays

God has truly left this place

 

Reviews

[Aleyah]

I love the chilling & intensity of your writing!! It's so beautiful and descriptive, fantastic. Every stanza has it's own feel to it, but they all relate to eachother, really, really, really, excellent poem. I really enjoyed this :)

[Omegax45]

This is very good, and I rarely read poetry.

[Lively]

Lovely poem, deep meaning, awesome words.

[brenda]

such a pretty poem!!!:') this was great and so beautiful poem and more i love this poem !!! ??? puzzled and some of the reviews and pleading for people to not cause drama again in wc !! jeez!

[SparksLC]

Wow this is really deep, good job =)

[alexlessah]

shizz dude. very very good man i love it.