Beat Hits Beat

Beat hits beat

 

Entangled in what is the truth of your encompassed amount of strings

I’m unable to paint an erotic picture

So exact

To depict what the pulsating entity is

Tangent to the extra febrile sensation exalted

Slowly fading only to recall

 

Beat hits beat

 

Tearing at your every chord to emulate the perfection within

To stimulate the bumps on your skin

Constantly searching for a revision

Reincarnate of that country time

Remorseful redemption to some extent

Some former line from a past time that cannot be relived

Reliving every chord

Every note

Every syllable

As

 

Beat hits beat  

Reviews

[Nipplegrinder]

Fantastic piece of writing.
You've a voice.
And it's heard loudly and clearly, in this.

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words and thoughts. I felt the song in your words. I liked the energy of the words. Thank you Nadia for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote