help?

i needed to write my feelings at this exact minute....

 Im just confused, did he cheat or not?

it was a year in a half on and offff on and offffff, you know like those sand timers, that fill one way and then a next. 

its like, when the sand fills up-so does my heart, and when it spills out...well so does my heart.- i think its too cheesey, like those awful love movies timewarner makes. 

 

i mean when we were off i was seeing other people, it was like a relationship of hurting each other, we were CONSTANTLY trying to find someone else, yet in the end...there was no one wed rather be with than each other 

making each other jealous, all of the time, but i could talk to him, 

 

i miss him 

i want him

 

Reviews

[Dan Hiland]

There isn't much to work with here. It reads more like a letter to an advice column- but I like the mental image of a sand timer being like your heart. The idea that two people could bounce back and forth so long in a game of jealousy is interesting. You're are in conflict, so this is the perfect time to expand on what you have already written- then you will probably find some answers you were not expecting. And as you do that, the reader will have more to go on...