Broken Angel

No one notices
and no body sees
the fallen angel
on bended knees.

Raising her vision to
the lonely skies,
she silently screams
and slowly dies.

Her wings were broken
by her terrible fall
but not her spirit
as she walks tall.

Strong in her heart
as in her mind
lingers the past
which was rarely kind.

With no other choice,
she pushes back hate
and walks ever forward
toward whatever fate.

Whether live or death
heaven or hell,
she'll accept what's
given till end of the bell.

Reviews

[Lorry]

Poignant words brought to life by the reality behind them and the silent suffering that has been endured. I especially like how despite the subject matter, your positivity still shines in these words and that is something to be grateful for.
Thank you for sharing.

[Shaquana Adams]

With no other choice,
she pushes back hate
and walks ever forward
toward whatever fate.

Whether live or death
heaven or hell,

I really like these lines. You did a great job :)
-QuanaWana

[A. Amos]

Whether live or death
heaven or hell,
she'll accept what's
given till end of the bell.


I absolutely love those verses,  very relateable! amazingly written and well expressed. 

[Pól]

Nice poem- maybe the last line could be improved

[MAC]

strong rhyme scheme that doesn't seem forced...flows so naturally. excellent write!

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Your writing is so Good. Well Done! Keep Writing Friend!

Do u read mine 2 "Why?, Who is a Poet"

If possible then give your reviews..

Regards,
Lucky

[B-poet]

Very well written, emphatic, creatively eloquent in regards to the tone you used representing a intriguing theme of epic proportions. Great write. :)

[revalatia]

nice rhymes.. I like this. It reminds of someone who doesn't give up, even when life kicks them down. good job.

[MAC]

being broken can take all feelings away. this is an excellent write!