Fear and The Night

Sense and feel the end fast

Approching.

Coming closer till it

Strangles

The throat and kills all

Breath.

It grips the heart and murders

Hope

As you lay screaming in the

Night.

All the time it's

Smiling

At

Your

Pain.

 

 

N. Strong

Reviews

[Orlando Murcia]

This was dark and chilly
in a fearful way
Short simple and I loved it

Great Write!

Orlando M

[Gheeneil]

Fear and the night are two dark forces which collaborate with each other. These are out for a kill. Furthermore, this piece may be short but it tells so much.

[Dawn Jones]

Very dark. I like how it dwindles down to the last word. Good job.

[Legion]

That is a pretty good description of it alright. Great write.