Broken

Broken

A Poem by Nyida Strong

Broken

Nothing works any more.

Shattered.

Why do I bother dreaming?

Shattered.

All hopes gone, like dust.

Lost.

No where to turn for help.

Fractured.

Hearing the sounds again.

Broken.

I'm not a monster, I'm not terrible, not really.
I'm just broken, there's no one to fix me.

I can't fix myself.

N. Strong

 

© 2008 Nyida Strong


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Ooooooooooooooo...the helplessness!...yes it does seem that way when in that state.....an honest poem.

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Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a very strong piece I should say!
simple yet straight and very much vivid!!

"I'm not a monster, I'm not terrible, not really.
I'm just broken, there's no one to fix me."-Lovely lines..

an awesome read overall :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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