Dream

Dream

A Poem by nyi
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something inspiring?

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Inside the shapeless space I might drift

And treasure I seek might be buried underneath

The deep of ocean in my quest for bliss

At the brink of destruction, might my courage be spawn

As I face my unseen future inside the chaotic mist

 

Above the lonely mountain, until a lone shark floats

And the countless stars at the sky all start to fade away

When the dying robot clings onto flicker of hope

And a windless eagle furiously runs after its prey

Then will I choose to abandon my dream, be this my devout oath

 

Nyi

( 25.11.2011 )

 

 

 

 

© 2011 nyi


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Inside our dreams. We fight battles and find places and things lost. I like the description in the poem. The lines are strong and are protecting unknown journey and desire. So many questions open by this poem. I like the complete poem. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
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Posted 12 Years Ago


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something serene and haunting about this..lovely write

Posted 12 Years Ago


LOVE! THIS IS DARK AND BEAUTIFUL

Posted 13 Years Ago


righteousness in dark ages

Posted 13 Years Ago


Heavenly spiritual work. I loved the chaos, destruction and birth. This poem is timeless. It's like experiencing the entire lifespan of humanity all in one glance.

Posted 13 Years Ago


And a windless eagle furiously runs after its prey
Then will I choose to abandon my dream, be this my devout oath
i love thatpart, but all together it was beautifully written. the word choice was amazing! love it, love it love.



Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on November 25, 2011
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Yangon, Myanmar Yangon



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