Definition

Definition

A Poem by nyi
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Depression

A mindless void thriving on sub-consciousness. The black hole that sucked out all precious things , teleporting these things into another dimension where one cannot slide, turning oneself into a new life form of living dead. The incapability to relate and connect with people other than yourself and versions of you. It is an insect feasting on the vitality for its growth and slowly consuming the desire to live. Reality is deceived by depression until it is trapped within oneself and believing into the hypothesis that you are the most lonely creature on earth.

 

Love

A fairy tale creature that is not resistant enough to defend the harness of reality. Loving someone  is like watching a glass placed on top of the shelf that is going to fall down and shatter into pieces by a gentle wind blow.  Love is a cheap illusion created within oneself so that we can move forward. A belief which forced us to believe that tomorrow is another day, somehow will be different. Love is a risky business. The odds that will take your life. But love is worth searching for. A will to risk yourself shattering like a broken glass,   or gaining the world if you are victorious. To love is to give. The quality of love is in the giving and the most precious things are received in this way of loving.

 

Addiction

An ink stained all things it touches, leaving scars aftermath. Rocking your life between ecstasy and despair. Making your life completely torrent and confusing. It is the source of all the problems. Addiction is a one way ticket ride, unable to return and nowhere to forward, utterly lost inside the wilderness of life. Pride and self-esteemed are lost and traded with a catalyst for the insatiable thirst and uncontrollable hunger. It is the force which mutates oneself into a juggernaut of desire.

 

Nyi

( 2.9.2011 )  

© 2011 nyi


Author's Note

nyi
I wrote this without any particular purpose or aim or any format. It is just what I wrote. Thanks for reading..

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Yes, depression is like mental cancer, feeding upon everything else and sucking it up inside its hard shell. But love could defeat this beast, while addiction waits in the wings to pounce.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I read about these paths that we can walk down in our lives and I wondered what was going on in behind that eye in your profile pic. You seem to have reached a new level of maturity/wisdom in your life. This is quite an epiphany. Such insight usually comes at a price and I hope all is well with you.

I loved the way the path of love was not perfect and you never guarantee that it is an easy path to walk. You are honest and tell us that the path of love can be just as painful as depression or addiction, but you did give us hope and courage to pursue love as it will be worth it in the end. I also appreciated the way you show us that we can affect others in a positive way even if our own path of love is still a tough one.

Life is a journey and the kindness of strangers often saves lives.
Thank you.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like the way you defined the words. The three emotions are needed and cause many downfalls and happiness. Thank you for your words.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago



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