The Queen

The Queen

A Poem by nyi
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"The one"

"

 A quick glance from you and I felt a thunder bolt

And your fleeting smile  engraves on my deserted heart

Are moments which make my rooted problems solved

With your natural beauty, you had created your own divine art

 

Fragrances of you memorized inside my mind

And are treasured like my only sole dream

For you had spiced my lonely life and made me shine

And you are the most beautiful creature I had ever seen

 

May you find the blissful life as you deserved

Remember me when you rolls inside the deep

For you to cast a smile, my life is reserved

Though a place in your heart is what I seek

 

Nyi

( 26.8.2011 )

 

 

 

 

© 2011 nyi


Author's Note

nyi
I'm not sure the title suits well...a quick write before I sleep

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A interesting poem. I like the tone and feel of this poem. A lay back flow of words leading to a very good ending. Better to be kind and leave a kind memory in the places of hearts of people we cared for and loved. Thank you for the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


THIS IS SO CREATIVE...SUCH A BEAUTIFUL MEANING AND YOU PAINT THE PRETTIEST PICTURE! LOVED THIS POEM!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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nyi

Yangon, Myanmar Yangon



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