Apology

When your generous and brave love has been ransomed

By my selfish craving of my need  and for my ravenous lust

Now these are my evil and unforgiving deeds that cannot be undone

Inflecting unintentional pain upon your pure love by my act

 

With the sudden absence of you, my life starts to deteriorate

Silently and slowly swallowed into the immense depth of deep

By my wallowing thoughts of you which seem to propagate

Through the limitless boundary of my arrogance projecting a leak

 

With the darkness of my frustration looming in broad day light

And inside these memories of you, I begin to reel

Against our now distanced chemistry of love, I cannot fight

Unwanted and abandoned are the only things that I feel

 

With the suppressed hatred for myself, I try to collect pieces of you

Through living on your favorite food and visiting your favorite place

I am drowning inside my blue and the color is so hue

So please let me be redeemed and us be reunited for our own sake

 

Nyi

9.7.2011

 

Reviews

[Joshua Donahue]

This is such a sad, yet realistic, piece of writing. It is, unfortunately, something I feel like I am facing myself so undoubtedly, it is a great write to me. I really liked this.

This is really good, it speaks to me of familiar and recent events in my life, so I can't help but feel it's perfect.

[Coyote Poetry]

Most of us learn too late to appreciate the kind and sweet people in our life. We wait too long and the deeds are not repairable. I could feel the sadness in your poem. A lesson can be learn from your words. When you are swimming in happiness. Need to hold on tight and be thankful. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[TheElfPrincess]

A lovely poem, full of emotions. Well done, I liked it.