Melodrama

With reverberating thoughts of you, I encapsulate myself

Electrified by your glances and touch, I am walking on cloud

I oblige myself to be yours forever even if you could not love me back

Please let me honor your beauty as it will be my righteous act

For you are the joyful rainbow to color my dull life

And perhaps the only reason for me to keep survive

Strangest thing this chaotic world brings is my unchanging love for you

You are always in my mind wherever I go and to you my heart is glued

I’ve been magnetized to you by your divine and cheerful nature

I had been reborn as you wake me up from the eternal coma

 

Nyi

( 15.6.2011 )

Author's Note

please ignore grammar mistakes if there is any...I wrote this on my way back to home from work...when I reach my house..I lost the mood to keep writing...so it could be a bit short poem with weird and long sentences...I chose the title this way because it is not really a bad title I think since the situation in my poem is like you see on some shows..I hope this is romantics...I don't really like writing about good things in life...but I try anyway..

Reviews

[Bertie]

Wonderful, the consistent use of religious and divine description work to push the mood of the poem to a celestial level and despite it's short length it feels rounded and whole.
Well done

[Coyote Poetry]

Few people can make us come alive and see the world with hope. I like the way you use the language to make your point. Thank you for the amazing poem.
Coyote