Goal

Living in the future

Cannot make you mature

Instead feel the thrill of victory

Risking everything is not an act of idiocy

Desire for success cannot be vanquished

Losing is temporary, soon it will be an antique

Everything will be devoured by your sheer will

Never lost a track of your goal, only then you shall

 

Nyi

( 13.5.2011 )

Author's Note

something i wrote before sleep.

Reviews

[-Scribe in Style-]

This is a great thought
While reading it, two lines came to my mind
Keep moving forward, there is no backward...
Once a mistake, twice a failure...

I definitely see the thoughts such as these unraveling before drifting off to sleep.
Sounds like a prayer for the conscious... Great!

Thanks for lifting the spirits.

[Coyote Poetry]

Very wise words in the poem. Need to celebrate everyday of life. Need to reach for the impossible and laugh at fear. I enjoyed the complete poem. Thank you for the positive and strong poem. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Revolutionary]

beautiful and inspirational.I like a good get your head out of you depression and go out there and try write.