Soul Revival

 My life keeps tumbling down

I try to face it as there is no other way around

My constant vigilance has disintegrated by the rising sun

Rolled black out of oblivion as I run

And I know that decisions are reflections of self

I endeavor to make a right choice despite my doubt

But if I fall into the deep and feel lost

I know I will still be revived by a love’s touch

 

Nyi

( 23.11.2010 )

Author's Note

Something that I wrote down during a lunch break at work..I do hope that this is meaningful..appreciate the comments..thanks for reading this..

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This poem was sad, but had a glimmer of light at the end.
Very heartfelt.

[Coyote Poetry]

Life takes us to many places. Happy times and bad times make us appreciate the sweet moments and opening of new doors of happiness. I like the last line. We can love many things. People, words and nature. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote