Air castle

Hush now my precious sweet

On caffeinated cocktails

Anything to get the big hand to ten

In all the places where your sanity has been banished forever.

Your eyes race with random selections

For things to grasp

Knowing soon

My touch  

For you.

Reviews

[Michael X]

Capturing romance- this poem splendid- in simplicity and moment.. the importance of a great first line
one that will grab the readers thought- as to the intentions- holds that classic mystic approach- like
gone with the wind- and those lovers who dwell in the depths of each others heart- poetic touch to

captivate a woman's heart- i believe this poem is surely effective to such regards- the metaphorical
essence of this poem .. when imagining eyes beading back and forth- select randomness...combined
with the image of being high on the effects of love-like caffiene- is the effects of bliss causing

an enrapturing sense to ponder.. Nice work. i enjoyed reading this. thanks

[shadadakiya]

wow thats diffrent great work