A Naked Soul

A Conversation with my maker

A Naked Soul

Amidst the darkness..

   A lowly and restless soul

       wraps itself in the stillness...

Forgetting every single joy

Remembering each and every pain

A soul wounded from past pains

     crawling towards the light...

Hoping to find shelter

     from the troubles it has entrapped itself in...

A Naked Soul

     with nothing to hide

     but the blemishes and scars of its heart.

A Naked Soul

     Exhausted yet full of Hope

     Shattered yet full of Faith

     Torn yet full of Love

And as the pain stops...

    The emotions inside its weary heart subsides

Its trembling hand opens a New Door

Its mind chanting a SONG OF PRAISE

A Soul naked for every eye to see

     yet, a soul standing firm..

            for the glory of its MAKER..

               way above every HUMAN EYE.

Reviews

[nyce]

Thank you ..
true ..thank you for sharing my sentiments ..

[SleeplessVolcano]

Such vulnerability you expressed in these words....echoes the truth that when we are weak, then we truly are strong.

Great poetry.