note2unknown shadow

note2unknown shadow

A Poem by susana
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two people saying how they feel but only to realize they are one.

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Why does she scream why does she have to HATE ME

What did I do, I didn’t do nothing

 Why do u HATE ME

All I want to do is be your friend and love u

U say I’m crazy that I only think about my self

HMMMMM I wonder if I would wake up today an feel no pain at all of what I did

How I destroy u and make u feel small

How I called u a name

U told me what a unfit mother I am u said u hate me

 U never did your job right u put dudes before your kids

U put Drugs before your kids

Wake up an look at who u are becoming u r becoming your mom the one that made u

© 2011 susana


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Very powerful! A vision of a person looking through the mirror to themselves! As much as people can be judgers & critics, I think we are the most hardest on ourselves! Again very powerful work! Hopefully a wake up call to this lost soul!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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susana
susana

colonial heights , VA



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