Take the Time..

Feel the soft breeze brush against your hair
The sun's warm ray set on your skin

You wonder how much your heart can bare
Oh, your rope is running on thin

Take deep breathes and indulge
Gently close your eyes and smile

Let your mind, body and soul evolve
The best things in life take a while

Open your eyes to witness true beauty
Let your heart out, let it rise and soar

So much more than the eyes can see
Right there, happiness drifts ashore...

Reviews

[Songbird0510]

Feel the soft breeze brush against your hair
The sun's warm ray set on your skin

I loved those lines! They evoke feelings of peace and rest. Those of which many crave. I enjoyed reading this gentle poem. Thank you!

[KeeD]

This poem was really calm and refreshing. Like an out of body experience.. the imagery makes the reader acquire complete peace. Taking it all in, i'm convinced this poem is beautiful.

[Jack...]

Beautiful, you poem is absolutely beuatiful. It is so minimal yet speaks in volumes of truth. You say you are not nearly as skilled and balanced as some, I think the opposite. Very nice.

[David Aiello]

I am captivated, and no edit would be vital.
It is the humble request of this poet that you continue your written explorations.
^_____^

[Just Kim]

Such a truthful write here, love the wisom in this.