The Change

The Change

A Poem by Nik

 

I heard the geese leave,
laughing between themselves
at our expense,
felt the palms of the wind callus
as they chafed upon yard brush trees,
chapping cheekbones
and lips.

 

© 2008 Nik


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that's a wonderful piece. even though it is so short, the image you created with your great choice and assembly of words, will last longer than the reading itself. i really, really enjoyed reading it, so thanks for sharing. :)

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Nik
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