Repercussions

I can never escape my redundant thoughts of self peril and deception,

I recoil every ounce of humanity I emit.

Losing myself in my own torturous swirl-pool of intoxication,

I fall deeper and deeper inside my thoughts.

Distancing myself from the world around me, 

I push away instincts of consequences of my actions. 

Allowing myself to detach from the dimension I reside,

I find myself in a parallel universe known only to me. 

Remaining in my head for a long while, 

I am jolted to a world that is different from before. 

The time I spent for myself,

has killed someone else.

My love has fallen to a dimension of his own, 

spiraling the whole time I did not see. 

He left all worlds completely because I was not there,

his soul has left me.

Reviews

[Gejodi]

Losing myself in my own torturous swirl-pool of intoxication, great line....lots of I"s.... I imagine guilt can be a very sharp sword indeed, real or imagined! Nice work again!

[Chewing Wildflowers]

Thank you very much!