Commander Man (Man we're not)

A nonsense song, however, upon rereading it, it makes a bizarre sort of sense if you look at it the right way.

Herbert's nothing, walk it off

Herbert's nothing, walk it off

Commander? Man, you're not

Communists? Man, we're not

Gosh we're scared, we're clawing the gnomes

Blackmail is the greatest fun

Now we gotta leave this one

Save these narrow moments for the  back dino

We'll see who guided the albino rhino

Elwood Eisner's broken knee

But it's  not enough, fat bee

Hurt comes next, no dying

Commander? Man, you're not

Communists? Man we're not

I'm a rambling cosmonaut

Men are full of things

Gosh, you're clever now, not fair, we're drinking

Gosh, that there girl is slacking off the inking

Then they took the bottled dawning

And they transposed through the awning

God was gonna rake a fish

Double backs on velcro wish

Gosh, now I'm a noise

Reviews

[Liz]

I really liked this, and I'm not quite sure why to be honest. It's just a nice read for me. I liked how it flowed. I'm not quite sure what it means, but I can think of ways that I could interpret it.
I really liked the lines "God was gonna rake a fish/ Double backs on velcro wish," for some reason.

Anyways, nicely done, I enjoyed reading this.