System of Anarchy: Forever temporary

love , hate , life , anything , life , evolution ,

Introduction

 

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Intrusion

 

 

Reality's a delusion

 

the Conclusion?

 

we're eluded

mentally polluted

subliminally disputed

repressed and muted

perhaps we need "to repeat evolution"

 

start from Z back to A

from the end back to ground zero

from scratch to scratch

it's doom day pray for a hero, to be around to save the day

 

 

a peace bird soared

The 3rd world has grown

and the 3rd world war is already on

a gun and a sword

you just haven't known

or just acting like so

Another chapter 

 

The rapture is pure

like when blood is mild and cured

it runs clean along the upstream

the night is obscure

the only clear is the moon

and i got caught in a single thought

its name is you

don't look backward, i would look if i were you

im surly well secured, got an army that would make devils' nervous and insecure

so every time you walk near this, on a tour

think of making everything allured, initially it fits like the truth

so i  f l u

Author's Note

it's not complete, just some thoughts evolving into something!

Reviews

[al25]

Really like the idea of the poem. Well written.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree the third world countries are getting stronger. The rich countries are not so rich. Separation from rich to poor is getting wider. Soon 95 per cent of this world will be on the same level. The sad fact is the USA had the largest separation of rich to poor in this world. The poem is powerful so far. I look forward to the end.
Coyote

[heich]

amazing..

[David W Moore III]

Nice bit of freestyle, even has a message. I like it. nice flow

[SimplyDisastrous]

I love this! Definitely a favorite of mine. Even though I know all the meanings of these words I just really like how it sounds and how it flows. Good job. (:

[Andrew Wright]

Beautiful flow... amazing rhymes. Keep 'em coming.

[Norma M Sutton]

It's a good start, keep going.

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

This becomes so different after another chapter..it was like two different poems fused into one piece.Enjoyed reading it,love the pace..

[Amber Betty Marie Child..]

very clever pop pops

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

love the quick trigger pops of the rhyme scheme~ the gritty reality of the underbelly of the mess we've made here on this planet and of each other is sharp and focused~fierce delivery ~ well done!~