Everything Else Is Vintage

drawing on your landscape, falling on your rollerskates
standing by your fruitstand, funny how you use your hands
stop breathing.
breathe it out for tomorrow's the last party.
and when you cut off your bangs it will rain
    rain
         rain
                   because you're still the same.
            it won't stop pouring out here.

Reviews

[Drifting Blue]

I love your word chains, the assonance, the subtlety. You have a way with words, playful yet with skill. Glad I found this.

[Caitlin Nicole]

Beautiful. Great job =]