two worlds

oh, what could have been.

Two worlds, apart.

Perfection when combined.

Two halves of a heart.

Yet the stars left unaligned.

Two steps from the finish.

Shoes nailed to the ground.

Two shadows, diminished.

The sun is not yet found.

Reviews

[Freder Fredersen (aka G..]

Interesting. Enjoyed the 'amost, but not quite' factor conveyed. And the aching need to be whole, and remaining halfway there....or closer. A great poet once wrote: "Everybody dies frustrated and sad, and that is beautiful." So in that sense, this was absolutely beautiful!

Cheers!
GM