I don't want to leave..

Chalice (ch-al-ece), is just asking God to give her another chance, she also wants to see her dad again.

 I  was only five years old when my father died. I now live with my step-mom, Constance. Constance is Catholic but, I'm Christian just like my mother and father. My mother couldn't afford to take care of me so since she didn't live with my father even though she was married to him, she gave me to him when I was Two months old. When she did this she put a locket around my neck that had a picture of her and my father in it. My father didn't understand why my mother gave her daughter away to someone that couldn't handle a baby. My father was pretty imature, so my mother left him. My father soon remarried three months after I was his. Now my step-mom is taking care of me but, I never understood why father left a beautiful, gentle, honest, Christian woman like my mother for a Catholic. I live at a little hill, (with Constance) in a house that's covered by all the trees, in San Juan, (san- who-an) Puerto Rico. I am a full blooded Puerto Rican, Constance is Puerto Rican too, except she's half American. So because of that she decided to move to the United States. I do know how to speak English very well, it's just I don't want to leave the place that is the one and only place that I can ever see my other again...in my life. How am I going to get used to America? New places...new people! This is ging to be very hard for me, I have to pray tonight. "Lord, please make sure that no harm comes to me or Constance...and please I don't want my mother to get hurt okay? Please protect my family, friends, and tell them that I always have room in my heart for them. In the name of the holy spirit....Amen." As I finshed praying I fixed my bed and went to sleep. he next morning was the day that Constance and I are moving to New Jersey. As we arrived at the airport I saw him. My heart started beating when I him, Jason Revin. He had long black hair that was up to his shoulders. He had light brown eyes. He was cute, and we knew each other since second grade. Now I'm going to the tenth grade. I am 16 years old, Jason is 17 years old. He calls me every day but, I haven't seen him in person since third grade. He is my best friend. He saw me and then started walking towards me "Hi Chalice. Did you miss me, I missed you. I prayed to see you again and here you are. I have been waitng a long time to see you Chalice. Are you moving too? My family is moving to New Jersey." he said as he looked into my eyes. "Ya, I missed you! You still have those pretty brown eyes from before don't you? MY step-mom decided to move to New Jersey. Can you belive that we might be living in the same neighborhood again?" I said to him. He smiled and nodded  yes and he reached for my hand...he walked with me until they called for gate 39-A which was my flight with Constance. I grabbed my suitcase and walked in through 39-A with Constance. I waved goodbye to Jason and I got on the plane. For the next two-to-four hours I was sitting next to complete strangers. The one on my right was a blonde boy around my age who kept on hitting on me. The girl on my left was blonde boy's sister, who was a lot younger and looked a lot like him. "Did it hurt when you feel from heaven my love?" blonde boy said to me. I gave him a weird look and I took out my Ipod. It only had Christian songs on it that were in Spanish. Then I went to sleep....I woke up when the air pilot told everyone that we're landing shortly. I got off the plane and I found out that blonde boy was Jason's younger brother!  "Little brother why are you hitting on Chalice! I want you to stay away from her okay? You barely know her!" Jason told blonde boy. I walked up to blonde boy once Jason left. "Who are you anyways? Why did Jason call you his little brother? He never told me he had any siblings." I said to blonde boy shyly. "My name is Jose Ray Jesse Revin. You can call me Ray J. Okay? I am the brother of Angelina Reina Rosalinda Revin, that's my younger sis, call her Angi. I am also the younger brother of Jason Jesse Abel Revin. my brother likes you, you know. " he said.                         <<<<Read next chapter....>>>>

Author's Note

for those of you that know how to speak/read spanish.... Chalice es una nina que no es una Americano..y Chalice tiene uno amor moy grande para Jason.....translation (Chalice is a girl that isn't American, and she has a big heart for Jason)....and she doesn't want to give her life up for anyone but God..

Reviews

[Susan14]

this is really good and interseting it is very well written except for some grammer mistakes but who doesn't make those, i can't wait to read the next chapter, write more soon