Sullen Girl

Yakari Ishimoto.

           People hear me...                                        But they chose not to listen.                               They tell me that I am silent,                           But do they know how loud I can scream?              Sometimes you say alot..                                        Without really saying anything... you can still be heard.                                 Like how a bird can be as silent as an ant.                   So sullen but yet so loud.                                   People never see this why you ask?                             They go about their own agenda and ignore the others... people like me.            Then when I speak they complain about how sullen and quiet I am.                       That is when they pay attention.                            Another example is how a red rose can tell you...    That they love you.           Or how a ring can say "Marry me." without you saying a word.                          By day people are alive and loud...                            By night not even the loudest person is speaking.          So by reading this poem aloud...                                 People will finally hear when I speak.                        I am the sullen-quiet-girl.

Author's Note

Ya... this peom is talking about Yakari Ishimoto's feelings and bascically discribeing her. She is a character from one of my up coming stories. I will write the story when I get the chance too. Sooo.. ya bye! XD

Reviews

[Momo the Elf]

i really like this poem~ i can relate to her thoughts a lot, actually... but i loved the wording you used, and the format i thought was particularly creative. great write! if it's not too much trouble, can you either message me or send me a read request when you write the Yakari Ishimoto's story? i would realy love to read it! :) anyways, wonderful job! ^_^

[Fanciful Goddess]

Amazing one of the most creative poems iv read....AND THE FORMAT STANDS OUT...
great job ....amazing im in awe....

[Rainbow Skank]

Ah... well the idea form this poem is not just from my new character Yakari. It was mostly based of off how I feel when im in school.

[Coyote Poetry]

A excellent poem. Voice your opinions and ideas. I like the set-up and the story. Ending was perfect.

Coyote