Fairytales

     Fairytales were never real, and don't exist but, only you can make your life amazing. Fairytales are more than dreams. they are dreams filled with love, passion, and hope. Fairytales are also good to dream about, and daydream about.

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I like the concept of this piece. Fairytales is almost a figment of our imaginations. However, in the middle and end of the piece you seem like you contradicted yourself, which sort of lost the beauty to the poem. You said that fairytales were never real and NEVER exist. But then you came back and said that fairytales are more than dreams...they are dreams filled with love, hope, and hapiness. I feel that if you go back and revise this piece and structure it a little bit better and stick to your inital thougths about fairytales not being real, it can actually be an intriguing piece. Thanks for sharing.

[Rainbow Skank]

uh I think that if I didn't get distracted so much I could think clearly!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD

[Emunah June.]

I like it Tati! Yeah you do sometimes trail off of what you were saying LOL.

[Rainbow Skank]

Thanks for the advice, my friends always tell me I lose track of what I'm saying so, anyways THANKS!!!! XD