My view

My view

A Poem by Nicole (Carpe Diem)
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This is my political view... I am not asking you to agree with me... I'm not trying to be preachy... I just need this to be said.

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Popularity keeps falling
Gas prices keep rising
Soldiers keep dying
We need a change
Before it’s too late
 
The dollar is becoming worthless
Oil companies keep making profits
People can barely afford to fill their tanks
The rich keep getting richer while everyone else suffers
 
What is going on
Why is a blind eye being turned
Why are you making it worse
 
LAME DUCK
You got us into this
Now be a man and fix it
Surely you see the problems
 
Another four years under this regime
Would destroy us for sure
More costs rising
More soldiers killed
 
Female empowerment is what we need
Who better to clean up this mess
Tough as nails
White house experienced
 
Issued declared
New and different
Others have female leaders
Why not us
 
“Let’s make history”
Bring back order
Get our country on its two feet again
Hillary 2008

© 2008 Nicole (Carpe Diem)


Author's Note

Nicole (Carpe Diem)
This is my political view... I am not asking you to agree with me... I'm not trying to be preachy... I just need this to be said.

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I completely agree with you, cept at this point I don't wanna vote for either of the democrats and I definately won't vote republican. When one gets caught bold faced lying and then trys to point fingers at another canidate, then that one starts picking back...ugh! It's like WC drama all over again!!!

You make valid points, blunt and to the point, but it's gonna boil down to a war with in our country, a democratic war. When we should be fighting crime, they're fighting eachother. This was supposed to be the election of change, now it's plain to see that nothing has changed.

Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.




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WoW! Awesomely said, gurl ;) Personally, I didn't vote for Bush lol. I've always been a democrat, and always will be. Even if im super rich or super poor, I still will be a democrat hehe. And yes, I did vote for Hillary. But after hearing what happened to her a few weeks back...Well, let's just say... I Still Vote For Hillary!! lol
Great Job hun :)

B.A.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Im down for any Democrat taking over. The Republicans are making this country worse. great piece

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Interesting reviews here of something that I know little about. Personally I would vote Robert Luna as he seems to be a better balanced individual than any of the contestants (if that's the right word). I guess being British I do at least have experience of seeing a female preside over our affairs - Margaret Thatcher.
Thats all I'm writing here.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I completely agree we need change to take place. But I am afraid to say the current way things are heading in the political race the way the two democrats are acting and dividing the party is going to end up being the fall of them both. Why do you think McCain is not saying anything about anything really right now. He is sitting back waiting for the two of them to destroy any chance they have at defeating him. One of them needs to back off their egos and step down for the good of the country. But once again I am afraid they both are so power hungry that they don't see what is truly happening. Yes people want change to take place but you are once again left with the thought which is the lesser of two evils. I pray for all of our sakes that one of them will wise up and down the right thing.

Great piece and you speak a wonderful truth and it is great to see a person willing to speak up for what they believe in.


Well Done!!!!!

I will leave you with this. Vote For Robert Luna he is a visionary with compassion for the people and is not afraid to tell a Mother F****r how it really is. Vote for the future Vote Robert Luna.

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Amen my rebel girl... you made this piece not only powerful and a great political statement but you did it with a graceful poetic style... and i whole heartedly agree with everything you say... Hillary 2008

Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

You go for it....a great write, your right, get someone who's going to do something to help change things and progress. Brilliant!


Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

I completely agree with you, cept at this point I don't wanna vote for either of the democrats and I definately won't vote republican. When one gets caught bold faced lying and then trys to point fingers at another canidate, then that one starts picking back...ugh! It's like WC drama all over again!!!

You make valid points, blunt and to the point, but it's gonna boil down to a war with in our country, a democratic war. When we should be fighting crime, they're fighting eachother. This was supposed to be the election of change, now it's plain to see that nothing has changed.

Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.


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