I Remember

I remember the spring we had

Our love blossomed; our happiness grew

Nothing could be better,

But just to be with you.

I remember the summer we had

Our love everlasting; our joy eternal

Those memories I will cherish,

Forever kept in my journal.

I remember the autumn we had

Our love peaked; our lives content

We both knew the truth,

And so grew our internal torment

I remember the winter we had

Our love shaken; your health declining

I cried every night,

My hope still shining

I remember the last words we had

Our love forever; our love forever

I whispered goodbye,

And we were no longer together.

Reviews

[tir lunes;]

You have so much talent, I really admire all of your work.
I think this is my favorite poem of yours.
The words flow beautifully,
and the meaning behind them was heartbreakingly real.

Great job, and good luck in the contest!

[TheOther]

Heartfelt poem, well written even though I find the rhyme a bit contrived. Nicely done.