Life

I opened my eyes

and i saw

When i saw i learned

When i learned i grew

When i grew i died

When i died

I began again

After i began

I opened my eyes

Reviews

[Jasmine]

this is very powerful. again very simple but very effective.

[Lily Mae]

I love this and the flow..the message is right on...xx excellent write..x

[Seshat Nidaba]

Isn't that song nowhere man fabulous? Of course, this reminded me of that. I liked the cyclic nature of the piece, as a poet it must appeal to you therefore to write another one like this? I hope.

[Larry Dyson]

poetic license in describing karma in your sight..nice write.

[Dove]

Simple but I really like it. Great job!

[Emily B]

life happens in cycles, again and again

[Emily B]

this reminds me of someone . . .

[Pebbles]

simple but so complex .... cool little write here always good to keep those eyes open :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

interesting look at life and quite a concept. I like it.