Drowning

Because the truth is we are all dead inside
Only half alive and torn into one million separate pieces
Barely breathing
Holding on to what?
I'm not sure what this is all for
Sandy beaches
Building houses and it all falls apart
Does God blame me or does he see that I'm in an ocean drowning
Save me

Reviews

[Acropolix]

An interesting read which leaves many questions and options to interpret. Certainly makes you think about it. Enjoyed the work!

[Novaki]

Thanks for your review! :D