Get Caught on Fire

You are sun

luminous energy flowing through

around

above and surrounding you is light

water

blowing air flowing bubbles particles of blue

you glue

right and wrong against each other

separate oxygen and hydrogen

sometimes you gotta just let air flow

let go of knowledge

evaporate and glow

learn from what you never felt before

let in what you never left before

water can get caught on fire

I'm the atmosphere

for all above required

 

- to H.SP.

Reviews

[mou]

as I interpret here you have described a need for an atmosphere or a perfect harmony ..sometime an argument of right or wrong split the coordination but still a flow of a unconsciously needed ingredient makes a better condition..to learn something new or left something ..
it is profound and please let me know if I'm going on the right track of your intention or not..

[Anonymous]

Thank you for reading and for your thoughtful inquisitive comment :) Most of my poems are open to interpretation, as there can be an endless array of meanings to be found. This particular poem adresses a person to open up their mind to a possibility of feelings or relationship. To be more specific, it addresses a college professor from a perspective of a student.

[mou]

okay it was roaming quite a near about :)
truly nice.. anyway it's my pleasure :)