Growing Pains

Growing Pains

A Poem by Anonymous

You say you don't like mind-reading
so it happens that my mind is a riddle
and I don't mind reading
between the lines.
Silence
echoes like buzz of a mosquito,
it's not you being awkward -
it's me being brittle.
Two broken glasses don't make a whole
sharp edges punching holes
but hey, let the blood flow.
Are we beyond repair 
or simply broken?
sharp shards scratching wounds
pounding open,
waiting to grow back or move forward?
Is this the epilogue or a foreword?
centrifugal escalations of conditions
anxiety fighting ambition 
Yes, we know how it goes
I don't care if it works,
They say growing hurts,
let our bloods flow.

-to Q.C.

© 2017 Anonymous


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"They say growing hurts,
let our bloods flow."
Nice imagination and ideas used here.. I liked the mind reading thing you came up with.. Good read!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anonymous

8 Years Ago

Thank you! This was still a draft, I need to do some work on it, and I appreciate the feedback!
Dr. YumnaKay

8 Years Ago

You are welcome! No problem ☺

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