You cannot balance while...

You cannot balance while

you are in motion.

balance only is at peace

It's here. What's next?

Thoughts. Emotions.

You ask. You ask. You ask. You ask.

Mmmmmmmm

What's next?

Reviews

[Asante]

Very enlightening piece! Kinda gave me that "aha!" moment, stopping to realize that many of us don't take time to do just that-- stop and realize. Balance cannot be attained in motion. Great work!

[Anonymous]

Thank you - I hoped people will find their meaning in it.

[Sarah]

Such a realistic poem about life. We're always on the move, never resting to stabilize ourselves. And when we do reach that balance, we're onto the next thing. Great piece!

[Anonymous]

Thank you; I appreciate the feedback.