Passing Emotions

old poem, for a friend;o)

Passing emotions between our selves,
A tree of feelings within our selves,
Crawling under each others skin,
Finding our selves, so irritating.

Passing translucent explanations,
That pass right through our expectations,
Of our selves and each other,
But still we keep a hold of one another-

Drift apart through the space of time,
A cold explanation takes me as if I'm blind,
Don�t patronise me cause I know you to well,
Now so what if u fell,
Stand up, cause your doing so well-

Your hidden troubles so plain to see,
Take a deep breath and be what you want to be!
Take a good look and see all that there is,
A warm explanation now you give-
No bad intentions that this comes with,
A life a head of us, now just to give?

Reviews

[The Autumn Faerie]

It's absolutely gorgeous!
I love it! ^__^

[Rambling Prose]

A beautifully penned sentiment...

[Bluet_Belle]

I like this. I like the message, but i LOVE the rhythm of it, they rhyme scheme is really great.