Someday You Will See My Pain

I am pushing myself over the edge

again.

I am watching him as he breaks and unzips

himself again.

I wish I could have helped them.

I really wanted to.

I wish I could have cured the problems

with a kiss.

But now there is nothing left.

Just a rock saying how long it lasted. 

He told me that someday I will understand.

I told him that someday he will feel my pain.

I wanted to kiss the problems away.

He wouldn't let me.

He just let me watched as he faded away.

I love you, please, just stay for another day.

He said everyone dies but we all don't go

to a better place.

Please stay for another minute or two.

Please stay so you can feel my pain.

Please stay again...

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A tear jerker indeed! So beautifully written, gr81 Missworld :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A very sad poem. To watch another fall to pieces. Trying and wanting to help is a hard place to be. I like the way you described the emotion in the poem.
"I love you, please, just stay for another day.

He said everyone dies but we all don't go
to a better place."
Thank you for a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[nevermindfan1991]

Great poem, I loved reading this poem, so profound, sad, beautiful and most of all genuine. Great job!

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This is a really beautifully written piece. I loved the emotion within the poem as well. It really hit me...thanks for sharing.

[Tasha]

This was beautiful, I could feel the emotion ringing in this. Keep up the good work.
♥ Ta'Shandra