His Head

Flames fly over his head.

He can't see them but

he feels them burn.

Children scream in his ear.

He can't see them but he feels

their hurt.

I am telling him to stay.

He sees me, hears me but breaks the

promise anyway.

I can't feel his heart.

I can see it as it breaks and

burns.

I can see his tears.

But I can't hear them anymore. 

Reviews

[Princess LouLou]

Great write, it is sad but the way it was written was wonderful.

[roy mccarthy]

great write,
sad and powerful!

[brenda]

:'( this was really sad this made me cry a lot i know how this feels like !:)

[Tasha]

Sad but brilliant. Amazing!
♥ Ta'shandra

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong and honest words in this poem. A lot of sad emotion and desire to keep something alive. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Raven Starhawk]

Hauntingly brilliant and composed with a set of emotions I feel accent this poem well.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I wanted to break this wall down.
You convey your emotions well.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A heartfelt write, lovely penning :)

[Ripple of Aqua]

So very sad. A little blurry and vauge. But good none the less.

short but straight to the point. good poem.