His Head

His Head

A Poem by Miss World

Flames fly over his head.
He can't see them but
he feels them burn.
Children scream in his ear.
He can't see them but he feels
their hurt.
I am telling him to stay.
He sees me, hears me but breaks the
promise anyway.
I can't feel his heart.
I can see it as it breaks and
burns.
I can see his tears.
But I can't hear them anymore. 

© 2011 Miss World


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Great write, it is sad but the way it was written was wonderful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


great write,
sad and powerful!

Posted 13 Years Ago


:'( this was really sad this made me cry a lot i know how this feels like !:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sad but brilliant. Amazing!
♥ Ta'shandra

Posted 13 Years Ago


Strong and honest words in this poem. A lot of sad emotion and desire to keep something alive. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


Hauntingly brilliant and composed with a set of emotions I feel accent this poem well.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I wanted to break this wall down.
You convey your emotions well.

Posted 13 Years Ago


A heartfelt write, lovely penning :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


So very sad. A little blurry and vauge. But good none the less.

Posted 13 Years Ago


short but straight to the point. good poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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