1 Month Ago

I remember you held me

a month ago.

I remember you told me it

would be okay a month ago.

I remember you promising me that

you would never leave me a month

ago. 

I remember I held you a

day ago.

I remember I told you it would be

okay a day ago.

I remember that you broke the promise

that you would never leave me a day ago.

Reviews

[Princess LouLou]

awehhh

[brenda]

sad btu great poem keep writing !:)

[Alicia Hirshey]

This is a great poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

Time does become important. Words can become hard and cold. Promises can leave us wishing for a better ending. A strong poem. I like the way you use time and emotion to make your point. A sad ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

the sadness seeps out. very nice.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

That was some day. It broke my heart.
It was like a cold wind blowing through my mind.
Lovely work.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

The hurt really comes through in this poem, great work :)

[Ripple of Aqua]

Its sad and full of pangs of regret.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This is completely sad...I can feel devastation within your words...I feel bad...I'm really sorry...