The Girl

There is a girl who lives in a 

hole under the bridge who cannot

talk and never will talk to 

the people who stare at her.

There is a girl with long black

hair that wears a white dress and

lives in hell with her demons and

nightmares.

There is a girl who everyone likes

and has a perfect life and walks

with the people who don't care

about her.

There is a girl inside of me

who secretly cares and secretly

wants to be more than a human. 

There is a girl who never sleeps

and never dreams of the silly monsters

who haunt her brain and control her

life.

There is a girl who knows why

a dead bird sings as it makes

it way to the disgusting depths of

hell. 

There is a girl inside of me who

is dying slowly just like her baby. 

Author's Note

I don't know where I got the inspiration from :P

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Interesting poem. It was good though. It was creative and I agree with Amanda it was dark. :D

[sugar]

I liked it but there was one problem for me....i dont think its a poem but more of a story

[Ripple of Aqua]

The last part was so wonderfully flowing, but at the very beginning, that first verse, "...hole under the bridge who cannot
talk and never will talk to..." I don't know why, but I found it to be out of place, maybe because you used the same word twice like that? Or maybe the order that you said it? I don't know, but I do know that no matter what your inspiration was, it was just as dark as it was uplifting.

[CharlesMonroe]

IT's very dark, but still very beautiful. An dit's amazing. I love it (:

[roy mccarthy]

i like it,
a little on the dark side!

[Helpless]

sometimes inspiration comes out of no where, those are often the best writings

its a rough start but it turned out to be a great poem:)

[joshua deathdealer]

Excellent write.

[Suzy Q]

I love this, maybe none of us know "which girl" we are exactly.

[Raven Starhawk]

Difference makes the world. This poem sets great example and has a rather meaningful message that I think I can adapt as my own. It is filled with images that to me relate to pain and heartache.