Both Dead

Song

Verse 1:

I am not living, just like you.

I am not speaking, just like her.

I am a ghost, just like everyone else.

Chorus:

Look at you, look at me, we are both dead. 

We are both not living.

Look at the world.

Look at us.

We are fucked up.

Just like everyone else.

Verse 2:

I am swimming in a pool of our blood.

I am talking to people who aren't real.

I am crazy but you are too.

I am barely breathing just like my mother.

Chorus x2

Ending:

And now it is dead like our baby

And now it is buried just like our graveyard

And now it is a ghost. 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A poem with a sad story. Would be a song about loss and death. I like the emotion and feelings in the strong words. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This would make a great song. It would be the saddest song I have heard in a while though. I loved this song. Thanks for sharing.

[Helpless]

would make a fantastic song! would love to hear the music to it :)