Both Dead

Song

Verse 1:

I am not living, just like you.

I am not speaking, just like her.

I am a ghost, just like everyone else.

Chorus:

Look at you, look at me, we are both dead. 

We are both not living.

Look at the world.

Look at us.

We are fucked up.

Just like everyone else.

Verse 2:

I am swimming in a pool of our blood.

I am talking to people who aren't real.

I am crazy but you are too.

I am barely breathing just like my mother.

Chorus x2

Ending:

And now it is dead like our baby

And now it is buried just like our graveyard

And now it is a ghost. 

Reviews

[BrightNeonBrilliancy]

I feel as if this were to be a perfect score in the backdrop of some gothic, undead dance of a rather undead beauty. Well done for makiing this work to an excellent grace. Lurrrvvvvinnnnn it XD

[CharlesMonroe]

Very powerful, very sad. I love it. It would sound amazing as a heavy metal song :D

[joshua deathdealer]

A very powerful and sad write.

[halflives]

Powerful lyrics, I agree. This is a loud, screaming song. It gets you. Well done.

[Kati]

Wow, really powerful lyrics

[Suzy Q]

I like this, I find it better if it's slow, calm and just chill. I don't know how you mean the rythms so I can't really say much. But it's really powerful peice, I like it.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Would indeed make a great song, has anger and sadness to it. Could suit like a punk/heavymetal genre. But then again, I can also imagine it as a acoustic solo version.

Great song:)

[Raven Starhawk]

This would be a intense song. Its power is driven by, in my opinion, sadness and anger. At least that is what I read into it. Well penned.

[ImagineItAll]

Pretty honest write, it feels. What genre of a song were you thinking this would be good for?

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is a story with serious impact. I love how it can be read straight forward or taken figuratively and it still makes perfect sense.