Austin

An actual poem

There is a boy named Austin, who fights everyday

There is a girl named Leslie, who cried herself to sleep

There is a guitar and a hospital bed

There is a voice that Austin can use

There is a shoulder for Leslie to cry on

Then there is a happy moment

There is a small moment when Austin wins his battle with life

There is a glimmer of happiness for Leslie when she doesn't have to cry

Then there is a funeral

Then everyone cries

Then Austin sees a girl

Then the girl sees him

Then they cry together

Author's Note

...yeah....

Reviews

speechless, its amazing

[patricia]

Superb poem, heart touchingly sad. Thankyou for such a memorable read.

[Raven Starhawk]

To untie in such a way is truly classic. Well penned!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Very good indeed, emotions come across really well :)

[-Scribe in Style-]

A powerful read.
Comes across as a crashing roller-coaster.

[yashsickle]

Very interesting, I love the first line a lot. Its a very powerful opener,it brings a lot to mind. Great piece!

[Misty Blue Eyes]

WOW..i got chills up and down my spine from reading this.. i want to say austin had cancer.. is that right?

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This is just completely sad......
Thanks for sharing..

[Miss World]

This is horrible, I know