I Will End It For You

My first song...

Verse 1:

I will slip another pill down my throat.

I will slash another knife through my broken heart.

I will cry on my bed, I will cry again.

I will die because you said I have to, baby.

 

Chorus:

I’m gonna end it all for you.

Make the pain feel true.

I will dig my own graveyard.

Just remember how I loved you.

I will make myself bleed because you are everything.

I wasn’t kidding when I said I would anything for you.

 

Verse 2:

I will smile with all of my friends.

But know deep inside I will never see them again.

I will play pretend, but only because you asked me to.

You don’t like to see me when I’m true.

And yes, I promise to rip it to shreds when it is done.

Yes, I know what you said and soon it will be over.

 

Bridge:

I loved you.

I do anything for you.

I will end it for you.

I love you, I do anything for you.

I will end it for you.

I will play pretend with my friends and then rip it to shreds.

I will smile and then kill it all because you told me to.

 

Chorus x2

 

Ending:

And now it is going.

And now it is a ghost.

And now I see you laughing because I fell for it all. 

Author's Note

I know its awful...

Reviews

[Raven Starhawk]

This has a extraordinary amount of melancholy that makes the flow smooth yet emotional. I found a great deal of pain in this as well as a feeling of betrayal. Love can make us do things we never thought we would ever do. It can sometimes lead us down a dangerous road of self destruction or a enchanted avenue of bliss.

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. I like the flow of words and strength in your song. Sometime better to have a liar smile then show a heartbreak. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Treble]

Awesome poem! It is not not and not awful. It is so so and so awesome!

[Alicia Hirshey]

This is not awful. I know all to well what it is like to feel like this after being hurt or feeling like you will never be good enough for someone, but it is never to hard to give up. Trust me, I know. In time we learn lessons and we all get hurt. It may have been love, I am not saying that it wasn't. But you will have your heart broken a lot and each time will hurt a little worse, but there is always something there to keep you holding on. Thank you for sharing this. Great write.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

It's not terrible or awful. It's good, but sad and emotional. Good write. I like it. :)