We're not disappearing.

I've been covering up....
With little noises and swallowing inside.
Greedy greedy, I might be, when its about you.

Because it would hurt you too much...
To see the bleeding I do without you.

Is it painful knowing that I'm not superhuman?
That I'm nothing special, especially compared to you.
My hands they are more able than you know.
I could paint the sky and shoot the stars.
(With you by my side.)

But I 'm lying when I say I'm okay.
The distance is killing me.
But your lying when you say it's okay.
Because I see you hurt so, yes I do.

You've been watering up....
At both corners of the eyes, tonight.
I'd die for the chance to make it alright.

Because it hurts me so f*****g much...
Attempting at sleeping without you.

No I can't blame you, for doing something you've got to do.
I'll prosecute myself, for casting a spell on you.
You my beautiful existence, all that I care to breath.
We could paint the sky and shoot the stars.
(With you by my side.)

But he's not lying when he says.
You've got breath taking eyes.
But your not lying when you say.
You would rather be here, with you by my side.
But he's not lying when he says.
I'm waiting for you everyday.

But he can't cover it up...
You need it too, it's a sharp hue.
Of the color, it's all I want to see.
Of when vision through touch spells happiness, spells you and me.

Even if its hell, here I'll wait.
Stand until it comes near, the date.
Of the color, it's all I want to see.
Of when vision through touch spells happiness, spells you and me.

Reviews

[Natalie C]

Even if its hell, here I'll wait.
Stand until it comes near, the date.
Of the color, it's all I want to see.
Of when vision through touch spells happiness, spells you and me.

Aww Lee, this was simply beautiful. Your longing, your pain def felt by whom read this. I can't but hope that your day will come soon, knowing long distance love is never easy.
Just remember to be strong, just like your words had shown and everything is going to be alright!

[.::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.]

Wow out of the two by you I've read this is deff my fave!!!
It's so beautiful if I had a bad day I would probably have teared up.
It's an amazing piece!!
If I were to write it I could never do that could!!!
Kudos too you!!!
I love this part!

But he's not lying when he says.
You've got breath taking eyes.
But your not lying when you say.
You would rather be here, with you by my side.
But he's not lying when he says.
I'm waiting for you everyday.

But he can't cover it up...
You need it too, it's a sharp hue.
Of the color, it's all I want to see.
Of when vision through touch spells happiness, spells you and me.

Even if its hell, here I'll wait.
Stand until it comes near, the date.
Of the color, it's all I want to see.
Of when vision through touch spells happiness, spells you and me.


This is an uterly amazing poem!!!!

[Gary H]

There's a great longing behind this. One of the interesting things about words is how they can induce so much feeling but sometimes 'touch' is so much more.
This is very hard hitting, the meaning increasing as the reader moves with the poem and they realise the implications of a love so far away. All is not what it seems.
I like the statement of intent and no matter what happens you have to believe 'We're not disappearing'.

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Great piece, seems to be about missing a loved one whos a distance away. Nicely done.