My butterflies stir.

I would love to see you in the sun.
Our smiles in unison staring back at one another.
This is a moment we have been waiting for.

Airplanes be careful for me.
I don't want my dreams to fall out of the sky.
My butterflies stir at the thought of her.

I've been waiting for so long for this to come true.
Of course the blessing is something I will tell you dear.
Sweet words for you whispered into your ear the first chance we are near.

Airplanes are Cupids' messenger for me.
His arrow will keep you safe in the sky.

We dream together as we float though happy visions.
About the things we have already imagined just right.
Soon it will change.

As the date comes closer, the air is getting to be more electric.
Its excited about your arrival.

We've been waiting for so long for this to come true.
The blessing is something we hold together dear.
Sweet words wait for you, they wait to light your fire.
My burning desire...

Author's Note

It is about how before I got to see her for the first time, I was excited about her arrival to Texas. I had an intense feeling that went with me every where.I had not really had a way to describe it. Then we were talking about how excited we were one night and she used butterflies. It hit me right there. Butterflies.I had never really had bad butterflies, the kind you get before you go on stage. I am a pretty calm guy. I had been excited for stuff before but, never that little secure feelings around your stomach some what touching the rest of you to.

Reviews

[Kara Emily Krantz]

really great piece you have here. :) the opening was really quite wonderful.

and i liked how you slipped from future to present to past to whatever, jumping in and out, making us not know what is NOW, until we realize that the date is nearing, and not yet

"My butterflies stir at the thought of her. "

fantastic. LOVE THIS LINE

[Natalie C]

Aww this really was such a sweet and heartfelt piece.
Your affection clearly noticeable whilst you craft your loving words so tenderly, creating the perfect picture within your readers minds of love's burning fire and beautiful butterflies

Great piece