So don't sew these stitches in my forehead.

Give association to the memory of this texture, this feeling.
Tapestry to match and o so adorable ornaments on your body.
Between the cracks in the urban infrastructure and these metaphors...
There is hidden meaning sarcastically direct, indirectly approaching you.

So don't sew these stitches in my forehead.

Are the currents to strong for liars like you?
I told you so, I told you so.
I am two hundred years too early.
I told you so, I told you so.

Brace your ears and relieve the pressure via liquid escape.
You think they vampired your life away. Pouring replacement.
A poison built to self medicate. Fuel for the degeneration.
You would kill for thirty minutes with. I refuse you. I refuse you.

Are the currents to strong for liars like you?
I told you so, I told you so.
I am two hundred years too early.
I told you so, I told you so.

Quickly I grasp control of sharp edges.
They invite me.
Tell me about this love you said.
You despise me.

In spite of, the changes in the headlights. I won't go back.
So don't sew these stitches in my forehead. But my ideas spill out.

Are the currents to strong for liars like you?
I told you so, I told you so.
I am two hundred years too early.
I told you so, I told you so.

Will you disappoint me, again.
For old times sake.
The words should be said.
But my ideas spill out.
Before I drown in the lake.

Reviews

[Natalie C]

Hmm this was so brilliant in its irony. This piece could easily be interpreted in so many different ways, I find it hard to decide which route I want to go.
So many images comes to mind and the vividness of your anger clearly visible in the repetition of the one stanza.
Disappointment in the world and the people that inhibit it as well as a release of emotion dominating my thoughts right now.
Leaving me with something to ponder about for a while, which I personally like about a poem.

Great work..

[Kara Emily Krantz]

This would pretty intense, and i was definitely crazily intrigued. I agree with Natalie that I'm not quite sure which way to go with intepretation, but I'm thinking this is the type of poem I just "go with the flow" and enjoy it, not try to analyze it. i'm not big on the analyzing anyhow... all i know is that i really apprecaited this piece... the flow worked well, and some of your word choices were just spectacular.

"You would kill for thirty minutes with. I refuse you. I refuse you."

for some reason I loved that line. and i thought your use of repetition was really effective, throughout the entirety of the piece.

"Quickly I grasp control of sharp edges.
They invite me.
Tell me about this love you said.
You despise me. "

that was another great part. really great.
impressed :)