Dream pains and a faint touch.

Here we stand with our human hearts in our hands.
Living in color and choking in slow motion, our scene is black and white.
You still can never let go, you are dead while holding on.
No wait, its too late....

Tell me something more.
I'm in a spiral of stability.
It feels so good with red walls and roses at the edges.

Push comes to shove remind me that I can bleed.
Take your hands off of me, put your dreams in a box.
Don't let it out, keep your mouth shut.
Sick of always hearing...

This is all wrong. This is all unreal.
This is all wrong. This is all unreal.

Talk like you know its nothing big.

Tell me something more.
I'm in a spiral of stability.
It feels so good with red walls and roses at the edges.

Que the moonlight, and drop the happiness.
A screen play for your dream pains.

Reviews

[Natalie C]

Great Lee, this was really brilliant.
Loved the amazing imagery you used in this piece to so effectively bring your feelings across.
Got so say loved the way you used a stage as the whole focal point of your piece. Gave me, as the reader the feeling that I am sitting in the audience watching the feelings slowly and painfully unveil, until there is nothing left to be said except for the sadness of a life out of control

Brilliant!