Beautiful writing.

A joke you might say.
Something you dress in place of lack.
For every other is better.
Anything different from the mediocrity.
Beautiful, your talking to me.
Beautiful, don't stop talking to me.

With more than I won't.
I said that I just possibly can't.
Darling don't settle for less.
If this burns, then I smile.
Writing girl, you are more than gold.
Writing girl, I apologize for my color.

Not as it should be.
Rationalize my hands failure.
Rust on my water colors.
Only not so much my soul.

As this cuts my chest wide open.
Thoughts invade my happy place.
Nothing communist, nothing yall promised.
Writing girl, you are more than gold.
Writing girl, I apologize for my color.

Today there is nothing.
It is what was left in the mantle.
My hearts pencil if false.
How can this be?

Writing girl, your talking to me.
Beautiful writing girl.
Beautiful, don't stop talking to me.

Your voice, sings me to our dream.

Reviews

[Natalie C]

Hmm Lee to be honest, not one of your best. It feels like you have too much going on here and that you weren't completely sure of where you wanted to go with this. Unlike all your other pieces it lacked your signature lyrical feel but hey, it really wasn't all bad.
I have to agree with the previous reviewer it had a nice flow to it, just not the Lee W Deason pieces, we are all used to.

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

I can't say that this is one of your best from the others i've read, but its a good write, and flowed nicely.


Great write.