House of Leaders

A house of leaders can be a blessing

No one panics in a crisis
Everyone can take action quick
Thoughts, clear, on the present prices
No job assigned, but all picked

A house full of leaders can be great
Everyone gets things done
When others would despair for a while
No time wasted in orders
No panic resides, though the thing be grave
Just worries and actions
With all the things that happen I'm glad
To live in a house of leaders

Author's Note

I just wrote this in a moment so I know it's not great, but... My cousin just cut his finger off, and he's only two! I had to let out a little of emotion

Reviews

[Lilly]

Oh poor thing! Hope your cousin is now doing ok!

But amazing how emotion can come from any place and be turned into a very nice work of poetry

[LunarSong]

Thank you, he's alright, in fact you could never tell it happened, the doctor was able to sew it up and he even grew back his fingernail :) Thanks for your review!

[Lilly]

Oh that's great!

You're welcome :)

[RachelReaper]

oh, your poor cousin! I'm sorry that happened to him, though if you had to release emotion, poetry is at least a constructive way to do so. This reminded me of Olympus for some reason.

[Calibaster]

ouch. don't tell me that! it sounds painful!

[Dearantlers]

He cut his finger off! Wow, I'm sorry for him!
I think your poem is great, no matter that you wrote it in a moment. You have got some real talent LunarSong!
Sorry I haven't been able to review anything for a while. :(

[LunarSong]

My cousin, but practically my little brother.

[Night]

I loved the poem, but I'm sorry about your brother

[Aeternal Oceanfire]

Ow! He cut his whole finger off! And I thought a broken thumb was bad. This world needs a good leader with wisdom, justice, fortitude, and temperance. Unfortunately, there are few good leaders in these times. Nice poem for so little time.